Reminiscing on summer

not really, I'm just a huge fan of Autumn, if fact, I cannot wait until Fall hits fully, I have too much winter/fall clothing for my own good. Anyway, I've been working on a graphic which is a product of my boredom for about the last 2 days; I was going to post a little fashion post but that will be for later.

Also; this is kind of old but I drew a sketch of a main character from a book. You might  have heard of it, it is called Catcher In The Rye. It's a great book, but believe me: The main character will get on your nerves. I loved Holden (the main character) at first, but towards the end he began deteriorating down a hole. It's still an amazing book, it'll really open your mind.

Anyway, here is how I thought the main character looked like; Except I'm more of a kitsch kind of drawer (sadly) and I can't do a really detailed depiction of him.

So a kitsch version of Holden Caulfield:

I know, it looks like the 10th doctor from Doctor Who a little (GOOD SHOW) but It's not. boo hoo at me and my inability to draw.

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Okay, here's the graphic I was working on. I used Sarabear123's doll. Sara's doll is one of the few portfolio heads I have to work with, and plus she is a really, truly, great friend and she's had a crappy graphic coming to her this whole time. Here's Sara!:

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Hair stinks, I know. and I'm too lazy to critique myself on anything else...

So... any constructive criticism would be much appreciated.